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Valley of Azmir

 
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Anu
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 11, 2009 7:38 am    Post subject: Valley of Azmir Reply with quote

[size=18]Here it is, landscape art. 90% digital. 10% from referance photo of MINE. [/size]

>:3 Please give feedback on full arsenal (but leave out the cannon balls) and dont shy away just because its a picture in DA which means youll have to click the link and 2 seconds of your life will be used up. Big Smile!

[b] http://anuojat.deviantart.com/art/Northern-plain-of-Azmir-114101801 [/b]
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ACE3000
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 11, 2009 8:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very good, but it can improve a little. The tree at the bottom does not look much like a tree, and the right side mountain is sticking out and not blending with the environment as much. Maybe the blurr tool wil cure the second one. Other than that it is good so keep up the good work! Smile
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Anu
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 2:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="ACE3000"]Very good, but it can improve a little. The tree at the bottom does not look much like a tree, and the right side mountain is sticking out and not blending with the environment as much. Maybe the blurr tool wil cure the second one. Other than that it is good so keep up the good work! Smile[/quote]

Thanks. Big Smile!

Would you care to tell me why isint the tree and the mountain working in your opinion? Smile

PS. The three "was" rushed :-P
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ACE3000
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 12, 2009 11:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

O I just thought that the mmountain edge looks too sharp and doesnt look bleded but blur would fix that.
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